Saturday, December 24, 2005

Never Let You Go..... Comments

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I alway knew it was gonna
take alot for me to settle down.
I' ve always been the type to
play the game
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JESSICA MASON
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Gina PrettyBrownEyes 26 January 2006

i think this is a good start and if you added a stanza or 2 elaborating on the last stanza, it would be even better. right now, you dont really expect the poem to end there, it seems like it only just started.

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