Monday, April 10, 2017

Never Let Go Comments

Rating: 4.8

They tell me nothing can be done, it's too late,
God has already sealed her fate.
I scream and tell them to wait,
but you're already at Heaven's gate.
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tanvi damle
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This poem serves as a vent for the pent up emotions. Touching. Loved the rhyme scheme, the rhythm. Lovely poem.

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Bharati Nayak 30 April 2017

Dear Tanvi Damle, your poem is really very heart touching..The pain and sorrow of your heart at the loss of a dear one has been expressed so movingly in this poem. You still feel the presence of the dear one- - - -because soul never dies- - Death is the reality of life cycle.We have to accept it.Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem.Keep writing.Wish you a bright future.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 April 2017

love laments in room of darkness to ruffle as pangs of pain gripes of being seized, quite emotive and surcharged with heart felt sorrow yet narrative story of love as when departed, thanks for inviting me to share,

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Ernest Makuakua 12 April 2017

WOW its beautifully written and emotional its moving Simetime its too hard to accept that something is gone someone so special yet they always leave at anycase its supposed to make us strong yet even after years it hurts but be of good chear God knows what is happening and is always comforting us through it all. When it goes away Look for God, theres no space he can never fill in your life. Keep writing

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Upendra Upm 11 April 2017

Good poem.It is a sad story.

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Taylor H 10 April 2017

Amazing poem that not only holds emotions in the words, but can pull at the heartstrings inside me.

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Jeanette Telusma 10 April 2017

Lovely flow, great poem. The word choice used caused me to feel what you felt. Keep it up. Please read some of my poems and let me know what you think.

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 April 2017

A well rhymed poem. Thanks

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Mihaela Pirjol 10 April 2017

This is a really heart-touching poem. The depth of your sadness, echoes throughout each line; the emotional intensity of loss, gives poetic power to this poem.

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