Never Leave You Alone Comments

This poem is expressing mourning and sadness within its touching expression from the beginning. I want to quote some effective lines here.............. Stop cry, i do Time run fast and still running Be near to you I am coming for You Thank you dear soul for posting this touching poem.

Naughty, naughty, girl, We love you too!

hugger-mugger, cloak-and-dagger! Truth dawned upon me. now I know why lot people read and commented your poems. You have gifted hand for writing love and romantic poet. 'The clouds turn gloomy dark But i have darker tears' This poem soaked and took holy bath in your phenomenal mind - a magic pot of ideas! Let me bid you adieu for the day! Hope u have smashing time unwritten soul with written heart.

'The clouds turn gloomy dark But i have darker tears..My mouring rain...Pouring in pain...Dropped..Fallen..Stained..on your bed'.....SO subtle yet extremely effective...'Time run fast and still running Be near to you..I am coming for You '... indeed these are my favourite lines in your poem (: ..well penned..thanx for sharing

There is no other person in this world to love eternally like you. The beloved is so secured even in death. Great work. I give 10+ marks.

oh US - lil soul this is so sad it made me cry: (SG xo

this poem reminded me of all my beloved whom i lost.. n left me with moist eyes.........

Thanks for dropping bye....Now with roses in your hand love follows a winding road and I'm sure the damsel will be there for you at the end your feelings show thru, never alone...regards

lil soul, this is a wonderful poem. it flows with warmth, and has a soulful touch you write so well, big bro.G

Great poem. I was impressed. It was written well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Best regards Akmal