Monday, June 27, 2005
Never Improving Always The Same Comments
Rating: ★5.0
Looking for an answer but not listening to words,
speaking without thinking and unleashing a world of hurt,
asking questions and trying to improve,
learning to shut up and let others do the work.
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Uriah Hamilton
27 June 2005
Laura, I think this is a very good poem, a lot of the frustrations we all have along our daily path.
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7/27/2025 8:32:16 AM # 1.0.0
I like the way you use the repetition of a line, in your recent work. it can be very effective, Laura. you strike the right balance by alternating the repeat, so it is more interesting to absorb. good work, my friend