Barely conscious
Or hardly caring which way
I face the World,
I take a bolder step,
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a very good idea of the poem)))) Never give up! ! ! and take care, you are a very good poet
I love changes.! It requires courage, audacity.And you have. Beautiful heart. Superbe! ! !
The path is always forward. And we must never give up. I like your thought so much. Positive thinking is going forward, Always forward ther is no other way: -) Wonderful
Very good poem sir, I sense almost what you were feeling, very inspiring poem.