Never Give Up Comments

If ones life has taken a turn for the worst, one mustn't loose sight of the fact that he/she is the one piloting his/her life. Sometimes, forces of faith and mind can be employed to drive forces of fate, as faith keeps those that keep the faith. An inspirational poem beautifully penned. Thanks for sharing and kudos Herbert.

beautiful inspiring poem, not to lose hope but strive on to reach the top.great poem. ritty

nice inspirational message

I really liked it, very very nice poem.Thank you for sharing My best wishes

You did such a good job. So positive and assuring. What a hopefull, stong willed poem. It is nice that you can share such encouraging words with everybody. You offer a guiding light to all. Nice! I like it. Deborah Cromer

A very positive poem, i liked it!

Being an optimist myself, I naturally liked this encouraging poem, Herbert. It was well written and expressed, and certainly uttered several very positive statements. Carl.

'You’re climbing the mounts in full force. You’re as powerful as a Trojan horse' that's a very inspirational poem indeed...well what can I say I wish i can be some dark horse, cause when I see the steep climb i feel afraid though..nice one Sir 10++.

wow a very powerful and motivated poem. i really enjoyed reading it, everything you said was so true. no matter what happenes in life, never give up. thanks fo sharing. i needed that, just to find hope again, because little by little i feel like i lose that hope and find my only way out is just to give up.

very nice work.... thank you for sharing 10 +

Beautiful poem. Imagination has no gravity.10.

DEAR MR HERBERT, Ifeel this poem which generate so much enthusiasm, encouragement for people with hardship could have been trimmed to a shorter length for easy communication. Some repeatition of words could have been avoided as they are not adding values to the poem.This is my personal opinion and expectation from a senior poet like you from whom we learn. overall it is a good poem and I rate it at A-08. Incidentally, my elder brother died on 22nd and I passed on the message to PH expecting they will convey to fellow poets thru their own Forum, which they didn't. Rests of the poem I'll read and rate as soon as time permits-Rajkumar

i loved it, very insightful. i gave it a 10 =)

i liked it a lot.......

We all desire for love and peace........Nice written piece.

I liked this piece. I feel it is really very poetic. A great job. Feel simple. Compose simple.

great job! ! i loved reading it.