Never Give Up Comments

The darkness over here is really colorful and has magnificent imagination.. Keep up the good work.. Rated +10

Commendable effort, Rudy. Your employment of tight, crisp stanzaec structure provides an eye-pleasing, mellifluous read...Be cautious of your graphical termonology in establishing metaphoric imagery IE: (blood/tears) ...as[ I.M.O.], that particular line in your poem, does not mesh well with the non-surreal tone of this poem....which, overall, i like.Of course, you are the author, and I.M.O., is just that, and nothing more...Nice Work...Keep that pen pumping! F j R 2009

A powerful and very moving poem, wonderfully well written - a well-deserved 10, and added to my favourites. Great writes!

The title says it all Rudy and your good versing brings this theme out really well - - - you are positive in the main with words like hope and in all this is well penned..... a 10 + + from Fay.

I luved it..well written and very passionate..XD

if i was a singer i'd choice this one to sing it

very nice poem, nice words keep write rudy, thanks

very nice 10++++ keep it up

That is where the saying fall down 8 times, get up nine comes from.

Very True. Like the way you've woven your words. Excellent verse! ...Give you 10 Best wishes Suzan Gumush