Tuesday, January 19, 2010

Never Give In Comments

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You have me crying
falling out of my seat
hoping that one day we'll meet
again
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andrew Diaz
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Sandra Dodd 07 February 2010

Chris keep writing and if you dont like my comments wirte me one telling me so rule of thumb seven words per line rhyme is good but not necessary every line unless that is the way you hear it, but dont have to try to make it go that way. letter theme? Put that in the start also! dont keep it a secret like a punch line La puente? Near Downey?

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