Chris keep writing
and if you dont like my comments wirte me one telling me so
rule of thumb seven words per line
rhyme is good but not necessary every line unless that is the way you hear it, but dont have to try to make it go that way.
letter theme? Put that in the start also! dont keep it a secret like a punch line
La puente? Near Downey?
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Chris keep writing and if you dont like my comments wirte me one telling me so rule of thumb seven words per line rhyme is good but not necessary every line unless that is the way you hear it, but dont have to try to make it go that way. letter theme? Put that in the start also! dont keep it a secret like a punch line La puente? Near Downey?