No poems are
As deeply felt
As those
Produced
By loss
Of One
You love.
Unfortunately,
That's a hurt
That really
Never heals
No matter
What you do!
A wound that
In deep silence
Bleeds.
The loss of a loved one creates a void and that void will never be filled up no matter how much time elapsed.
Your beautifully written, stirring poem well expresses feeling of grief and loss, on this day of remembrance.
"A wound that /in deep silence// bleeds" my heart bleeds too. Loved the emotive expression..
Thank you all o much for your wonderful and deeply understanding comments. They do bring consolation.
A great sadness this poems causes each time I read, but this is the very truth so honestly told. The concluding three lines says it all. A fascinating poem that stirs and touched my heart, dearest Sandra.5 Stars Top score!
' A wound that in deep silence bleeds', beautiful lines from a great poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A powerful and moving poem that deeply expresses the agony of those who were left behind. So hard not to remember the pains brought about by the loss of a loved one.