Sunday, February 3, 2008

Never Forget Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Darkness is a value
That no one should erase
Tears are proof of sorrow
Filling everyday
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Kaitlin Parsons
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Bonnie Collins 03 February 2008

The poem has a very negitive feel, if you were trying to potray that emotion it came through excellent, however, suiside is such a serious topic, your poetry is good! ! Bonnie Collins

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Bill Smith 03 February 2008

deep, deep, deep well writ smiffy

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