Never Feed Your Body With The Dead Soul Comments

dare to dream in a dream..great

Such is the trick; to harness the power of dream_ and feed life of its every speck_ lest it turns an ashen lark... Thumbs up.

Great work,100 thumb up for you.

Yes dream within a dream my friend.

It is a very good poem. I like it very much.

i waz reading on my 4ne, and i was mad dat it had to end, left me begn 4 mo, nyc writing...

The poem is short but very sweet with beautiful meaning. i think the poem should be as popular as '' dreams'' written by LANGSTON HUGHES.

Abdul your poem is fabulous and outstanding.It's got everything! But most of all...it is a magnificent work of art!

With many lines line these ye, a poet you hit my heart again and again with alliteration and rhythm. An en-captivating and soul stirring poem by you, oh friend Wahabji! Make sure that the soul is never dead And the body is never dead soul fed.

It's great n the art got me captivated. Good work

This poem is composed very thoughtfully...alliteration, assonance, consonance, rhythm, beat...all worked out well...

wonderful.So never let the dream to break down - - i love it, great poem. thanks :)

That is really good i love it

let your dreams be breath, let your breath be shared! good one!