Never Ever Keep A Whale In Your Pond Comments
Did you ever hear of the tale,
about the Man...who kept in a small pond...a rather huge Whale.
(in my opinion, he should have gone to jail)
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the wording could somehow be polished a bit. the last few lines I mean. I 100% get you on this Lyn...I did rush the ending and knew it needed more...It was one of them moment poems if ya get me? ...errr...I had an idea and just did it in about 30 mins...I should have put it in my ideas note pad really...but I posted it.I will get back to it soon.Thanks again for all your comments :)
excellent. the end is perfect, but the wording could somehow be polished a bit. the last few lines I mean. still a great poem!
the man lives- all out at sea. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
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7/19/2025 2:12:19 PM # 1.0.0
Nice idea for a poem