Thursday, March 24, 2016

Never Ending Torture Comments

Rating: 4.8

Why? Oh why do this
Have I angered you in some way?
Beautiful sounds you drown in your nasty wish
Hard work destroyed in your 'Crinkle, Crackle, Boom'bay.
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Hector Les Cor
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Timothy Mcpoetry 02 April 2016

Bueno Hector! Please check out my latest piece Shame This poem reminded me of my own struggles.

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Dr Antony Theodore 29 March 2016

Why? Oh why do this Have I angered you in some way? Beautiful sounds you drown in your nasty wish Hard work destroyed in your 'Crinkle, Crackle, Boom'bay. life and its struggle.... thank you for expressing your struggles of daily life. tony

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Chinedu Dike 26 March 2016

A well articulated and nicely encapsulated piece of poetry insightfully penned from the heart with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Hector.

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Hector Les Cor 24 March 2016

Merci Mike! I appreciate your suggestions! I'm a little stubborn and stuck in my ways though. I like the variety that only the radio can provide, even if I only hear great music for 30 second of my 40 minute drive. Any feed back you can give me is welcomed!

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Mike Smith 24 March 2016

Very interesting. Didn't know what to make of it until I read the authors note. Good write. P.S. Maybe try a cd? Or satellite radio

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Hector Les Cor

Hector Les Cor

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