How many times did we say goodbye to each other?
How many times did we say such hurtful words?
How many times did you distrust me and my ways?
Countless days and nights, I weep endlessly.
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Emotion leaps out of this piece. The repetition forces it out, imprints it on the reader. Powerful and memorable, thank you June.
Wow, wow, wow! Sino s'ya? Relax ka lang, my friend, ang puso mo - lol! Hindi ka naman galit, ha? Just kidding! very well expressed! : -)
I like this anaphora: '' How many times'' well written poem..............