Friday, June 12, 2009

Never Ending Goodbyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

How many times did we say goodbye to each other?
How many times did we say such hurtful words?
How many times did you distrust me and my ways?
Countless days and nights, I weep endlessly.
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June FeirCruz
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Marieta Maglas 30 July 2009

I like this anaphora: '' How many times'' well written poem..............

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Les Derbyshire 19 June 2009

Emotion leaps out of this piece. The repetition forces it out, imprints it on the reader. Powerful and memorable, thank you June.

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Smiley Hooker 13 June 2009

Wow, wow, wow! Sino s'ya? Relax ka lang, my friend, ang puso mo - lol! Hindi ka naman galit, ha? Just kidding! very well expressed! : -)

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I Am Charlie 12 June 2009

not sure about the exclaimation marks at the end.

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