Sunday, August 17, 2008

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Didn't mama alwayz tell you bout dem naz-t boyz
da onez dat spit 3 inches from your shoez
and dem not care to hit.
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Sophonie Asia Joseph
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Vinod Kumar 08 January 2009

Advice to teenagers, good poem, well written keep writing, Thanks for sharing,

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Aliya Deri 11 September 2008

wow! It reminds me of 'We Real Cool' by Gwendolyn Brooks. Extremely insightful.

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, aryaindia 17 August 2008

This accent is not one that all would be able to follow. Something quite unusual but written with depth and meaning. Your poem reaches out to those who have not followed good advice. Good. Keep writing.

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