Monday, March 12, 2007

Never Conquers Bliss Comments

Rating: 4.0

A skeletal alien stares from the picture
Happy moments frozen in time
with only remembrances of illness
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Oni Hayes
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That poem is beatiful. Great write, Smilse N Hugs Rissa: -)

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Stug Jordan 19 March 2007

Right words in the right places. That's a poem! I like the way you hint at rather than say to. You'd think vice versa would be better, but in this case you're bang on.

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Oni Hayes

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