Tuesday, September 29, 2020

Never Coming Back Comments

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Never coming back

When the easterly winds arrive
I shall fly the kite of my life
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Deluke Muwanigwa
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Terry Craddock 02 October 2020

I wrote the poem 'Is Love Unrequited A Prison? ' inspired by the poem 'Never Coming Back' by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa and dedicated to Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Terry Craddock 02 October 2020

First Step Stepping Out Into Love a pulse beat slow less defined is melancholic sadness echoes in reality love tender wilted lost appreciated spent slow pulse beat first step stepping out into love future first step stepping out into love future potential unknown Inspired by the poem 'Never Coming Back' by the poet Deluke Muwanigwa. Dedicated to the poet Deluke Muwanigwa.

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Varsha M 29 September 2020

My kite will rise and rise and rise Over the ocean for many nights fly to nether yonder lands my future in my hands Fly to my new wife New inlaws, new fights Never making the mistake, And, Never coming back.....as per poetry beautifully written and expressed.

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Terry Craddock 29 September 2020

'The night before i leave i will eat my last supper, cooked by my wife who i know will suffer, bid her adieu in melancholic silence and prepare my divorce from her kindness' there is embodied within this exceptional emotive poem, a pulse beat slow well defined melancholic sadness, echoes in reality love tender lost appreciated spent, slow pulse beat first step stepping into love future potential unknown

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