Sunday, June 9, 2013

Never Comes True.. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The night in slumber,
lies beside me.
I grope but can't find
the desired you!
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Neela Nath Das
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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

me and you just a dream never comes true, these words ring a bell. excellent

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Shahzia Batool 14 June 2013

engrossing write! ! ! ! !

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R.j. Wynn 11 June 2013

Beautiful poem, graceful, well penned and meaningful.

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David Wood 10 June 2013

Love can be elusive, but keep looking for that one true love.

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Vishal Sharma 09 June 2013

great yearn in lines can be felt great poem as well liked a lot

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