Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Never Come Back To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Solitude in grey
Almost here
Undefined portrait of beauty
Mesmerizing wave was silent
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Geoffrey Ngoima Ndegwa. 08 October 2011

I have to struggle to get this one, i wonder whether the 'Curtain of human' are the barriers of our visualization of what we need to see(the truth, real love, a person's real colours) .... Its a well rounded piece, bigger than my critique....

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Vipins Puthooran 07 October 2011

well written..(undefined portrait of beauty never come back to anyone) ..nice message.. It's a good poem.

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Hans Vr 05 October 2011

Strong message, very poetically expressed Sometimes indeed better to keep vice at a distance. It makes me happy to think I see a healing process going on.

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