Friday, November 25, 2005

Never Before Comments

Rating: 4.0

Gazing at the stars,
my heart broken to the core.
For once I fell in love,
like no other time before.
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Valerie Anderson
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Steve Armstrong 27 November 2005

Awh, i've got a tear in my eye now, this is really sad, and, something i think everyone can relate to in life. A brilliant poem! Steve

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Peter A. Crowther 27 November 2005

Nice love poem and very sincere. Good consistent rhyme scheme throughout.

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Cj Heck 25 November 2005

The love shines through in your words, Valerie. Warmest regards, CJ

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