here i'm drowning in the tears of my memory...
wondering thinking who i'm gonna be...
that because when you left you tooke a big part of me...
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wow x i think at the age of 16 you should be very proud. its a really good poem, really touching, xx
there are times and fights when one thinks he/she can never be friend with friend he/she is in fight with.................though many regret it later...........hope that's not your case good work
agreed with your bold idea..love it and appreciate your expressions, , , well doen 10+++++++++
really bold, but i hope u havnt jumped into conclusions like this too fast1
nice realization.. that's very strong of you... i like how this is written, thanks for sharing
nice realization.. that's very strong of you... i like how this is written, thanks for sharing
I think just about everyone can relate to this poem... nicely written yet so sad...
yes how it ends never be friends never be friend of not 'her' or 'him' and anybody else superb! ! 10 times rated 10! ! write some more Dana! ..Ali
this is pretty good. just has a lot of spelling errors... otherwise it has a nice rhythm. good write!
this poem scared me whilst reading it.. as i had some unsettle waters with my friend, who has our name.. i hope it is not prophetic.. watch your spelling n tenses.. but good poem.
I agree with jaye. this is really really good. and you should be proud that you can write like this: ]