here i'm drowning in the tears of my memory...
wondering thinking who i'm gonna be...
that because when you left you tooke a big part of me...
my heart and my soul are still in your property...
its like i have to build myself again...
but i really dont know where to begin...
but at least i know how it ends...
that you and I will NEVER be friends..
nice realization.. that's very strong of you... i like how this is written, thanks for sharing
I think just about everyone can relate to this poem... nicely written yet so sad...
yes how it ends never be friends never be friend of not 'her' or 'him' and anybody else superb! ! 10 times rated 10! ! write some more Dana! ..Ali
I agree with jaye. this is really really good. and you should be proud that you can write like this: ]
wow x i think at the age of 16 you should be very proud. its a really good poem, really touching, xx
there are times and fights when one thinks he/she can never be friend with friend he/she is in fight with.................though many regret it later...........hope that's not your case good work
agreed with your bold idea..love it and appreciate your expressions, , , well doen 10+++++++++
really bold, but i hope u havnt jumped into conclusions like this too fast1
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
nice realization.. that's very strong of you... i like how this is written, thanks for sharing