Loneliness taunts
In new soil
In old age
In poverty
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you asked me to read thispoem... i believe it is a good poem but through my poem we could have a few discusions on this topic
The reason loneliness is found in the soil Is because the people are new Also you have to remember that In this soil are lots of people Who don't speak the same language that we do So they become lonely And the sick have no choice but to be in bed We kill the birds And our nature By driving fancy cars
You are absolutly correct...Thanks for sharing such a nice poem...
A very good contradictory poem, but as humans i don't think so we will just be satisfied with nature during the absence of our loving one. But there are times where we need to accept the truth and console ourself that we are never alone, this is a topic which is best suited to be debated... the poem is constructed so well, bringing out some of the real facts to light. Thanks for sharing!