Wednesday, October 26, 2011

Never Again Will Roses Be Given, To You Who Are So Undeserving Comments

Rating: 5.0

Warranties expired on the test of my good tolerance
Now I'm ready to collar you for a trip down the market
Sick and rabid you, bite with ferocity spilling words from a witches cauldron
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Kevin Patrick
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Richard Wlodarski 09 February 2017

It's great that you were able to vent through this creative outlet. A lot of vivid imagery. Emotions are very well expressed. Provocative and evocative. Definitely worthy of the mighty 10!

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Ashley Bachtel 27 October 2011

This is very intense and well written. I like this one! I can relate to this whole- heartedly!

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