Sunday, December 16, 2012

Never Again Comments

Rating: 5.0

Never again will I sit across
Smell your breath in the air
Hold your gaze through the stare
Feel your touch in my hair
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Banu Dai
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Banu Dai 20 December 2012

Thank you so much Tiffany..........i am overwhelmed by your appreciation!

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Tiffany Baldwin 18 December 2012

Very sad. I not only thought this poem was beautiful. It was well written and it touched my heart.

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Jahan Zeb 17 December 2012

Wow what a start. This is very rhythmic. I liked the rhyming of this artistic poem and love the thoughts and message delivered through this. You did it with such ease but believe me this would have been not easy. A very nice poem showed the pace and the enthusiasm of the poetess. You have forced your readers to read the whole poem in one go.

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Banu Dai 16 December 2012

Thank u so much Jahan Zaib................thanks again!

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Jahan Zeb 16 December 2012

Wow what a start. This is very rhythmic. I liked the rhyming of this artistic poem and love the thoughts and message delivered through this. You did it with such ease but believe me this would have been not easy. A very nice poem should the pace and the enthusiasm of the poem. You have forced your readers to read the whole poem in one go. Lovely

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Banu Dai 16 December 2012

I would be delighted Mr Gajanan Mishra...........and thank u so much.

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