Thursday, February 2, 2023

Never A Star Comments

Rating: 5.0

lost my place in queue
never meant to be
in the public's view
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Richard Wlodarski
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Anjandev Roy 05 February 2023

Excellent short work.....thank u......

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 05 February 2023

The lost place will come back very soon; it's just in time frame!

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Richard Wlodarski 05 February 2023

I love your very optimistic response, my friend! THX so very much!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 February 2023

Wonderful Richard I love it more the sercond time around

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

A revisit is always such high flattery. And to love it even more...breathless! THX so much, LeeAnn.

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M.J. Lemon 03 February 2023

Brilliant and philosophical, Richard. What happens (a reaction or result) is based on a cause (or our own action) . But how much do we control, like, find favour when the result is not what we envision? Brillinat work, Richard!

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

Talk about philosophical! M.J., your comments always show such great insight and depth. Much obliged, my friend!

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

2) THX so very much for sending it to your favourites.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

LeeAnn, THX so very much for adding this poem to your favourites.

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Yes dear Richard, we must wait for the destiny to find our turn

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

And sometimes...that destiny waits for another life. THX very much, Poet Nair, for reading and commenting.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 February 2023

I also feel the same way. Very witty and clever poem. Very instinctive and spontaneous. That makes it special.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

I wonder how many poets on PH feel the same way. If I was a betting man, I'd say the vast majority. Nosheen, I'm positively overwhelmed by your comments. THX so very much.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

A brilliant three liner, so well thought out.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

Greatly appreciate such a high appraisal, Rose Marie.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 February 2023

Sometimes we are put in a place we are destined to be and other times it is designed by our choices in life.

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Richard Wlodarski 03 February 2023

What if those choices had steered us away from where we were destined to be?

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 February 2023

Your nice caption makes up the last line of your telling poem piece

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Richard Wlodarski 02 February 2023

'Honesty is the best policy'. THX, Kesav for being the 1st to read and comment!

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