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If by any chance you remember me:
my embrace,
my smile,
The love we made,
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'never would be' in your well penned poem the 'subtle flame' of these last words enlightens everything.. Life is a whole of positive and negative experiences (plus the neutral ones.. but they don't count..) . The negatives ones, usually prevail. But all of them mold who we are.. Thanks for sharing, Margarita
Great poem, Margarita! Reminds me of the love I let slip away, only to ache still to this day.
Thank you Scotty! I think we've all let love slip away at least once in our lives. Take care of yourself!
Love should not have to be this tricky...but it often is. Thanks, Margarita
So true Kelly. Thank you for taking the time to read it and comment.
Poetry is an excellent way to share emotions and you did it perfectly my friend. Such great organization. I love it. God bless you
You say it right in the poem, Margarita. Love should be selfless. Thanks for sharing.
Emotional write.Sad that the love is gone so soon.Liked the way you put it.
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Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It is however, whimsical and temperamental, appearing without notice and may leave without warning if not carefully nurtured at all time to maintain its bliss. A well articulated love poem insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Margarita. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
Thank you Chinedu Dike I appreciate you taking the time to read it and the feedback! I will indeed be reading your poem. Take Care