Saturday, May 21, 2011

Never Comments

Rating: 5.0

minds unfolding,
hearts racing,
the clock ticking,
as I just sit and wait.
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Katherine Bryce
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Katherine Bryce 05 February 2012

Well I know that, but I was implying, my time. my time on earth, so waiting till I die basically. sorry it took so long to reply, I thought I did, but obviously i didnt... =S

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Cleveland Gibson 08 July 2011

Romantic bitter -sweet poem. Your line: waiting till time ends, Time doesn't end: it is we mortals that do. After that time continues. Trust me I'm a science fiction writer. Best wishes

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