Sunday, December 4, 2005

Neurosis Comments

Rating: 5.0

On the light path of life's winds
Moving tenderly without restraint
Days of glory and expansion
Doing things right, inside and out
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Ray Andrews
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Elya Thorn 31 December 2005

Indeed, a great poem! I love the swing between the good and the bad, this swing probably being the neurosis, very well written, great imagery!

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Mary Nagy 05 December 2005

Great way to put to words how so many of us feel Ray. I have experienced this feeling hovering over me (for apparently no reason) many times. It's easy to see later but.........hindsights 20/20 right? Very nice poem. Sincerely, Mary

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