Friday, September 19, 2008

~~~~nettles In My Garden~~~~ Comments

Rating: 3.5

I grow nettles in my garden
I hate flowers...
Theyre so pretty
Sweet, scented, natures lot
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 13 November 2008

hopeful words...love is worth the wait... a 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 September 2008

a real time garden that must be...the mind...good meaningful write, Wardha...ten for your piece

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

Shukria Wardha. A lovely composition, I love the last stanza most.10++

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To survive amidst the enemy 'To be wary of your coming back to me' last line has taken it into another matrix.... I wish I’d grown nettles too I wish I too had nurtured truth Then breeding dreams I wish I had roots in terra firma

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Sadiqullah Khan 19 September 2008

Is life getting too prickly, , , here it is again not different from the fantasies of flowers, , , , well written,10

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