A seagull looked down
saw a woman but focused
just on the
fish
...
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Yes, those seagulls are born focused on a free meal- - - but I had to wonder...... were you playing with words again? I also read this as the seagull was focused on the woman's black fish net nylons ? ? ? ? ? 10++++++++++++
but focused just on the fish nets.... lovely theme with humor. Best senryu. Thanks for sharing.
Yes, focus only on the target, never get carried away by extraneous objects....! This ts the lesson the poem teaches me! Great senryu!
Ok, i admit, it was seagull. smart poem and nice humor. seagul is a friend of mine!
Hahahaha. Humor n deep insight can go together, you make us believe here. A 10
Hahahahaha o fish or other eyes dont get trapped...ok hahahaha what a humor write here :)
Lol...A lovely play on words. Rightfully so the seagulls are thinking that there may be fish in those nets.
Thanks, Simone! I still keep playing with 'fish' and come up with meanings that even I think I missed teh first time around. Thank you so much.