Thursday, July 13, 2017

Nets Comments

Rating: 5.0

A seagull looked down
saw a woman but focused
just on the
fish
...
Read full text

M.J. Lemon
COMMENTS
Simone Inez Harriman 11 September 2017

Lol...A lovely play on words. Rightfully so the seagulls are thinking that there may be fish in those nets.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 15 September 2017

Thanks, Simone! I still keep playing with 'fish' and come up with meanings that even I think I missed teh first time around. Thank you so much.

0 0
Susan Williams 10 August 2017

Yes, those seagulls are born focused on a free meal- - - but I had to wonder...... were you playing with words again? I also read this as the seagull was focused on the woman's black fish net nylons ? ? ? ? ? 10++++++++++++

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 10 August 2017

Susan, thanks so much. And words are so....terrific!

0 0
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2017

but focused just on the fish nets.... lovely theme with humor. Best senryu. Thanks for sharing.

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 23 July 2017

Kumarmani, thank you so very much.

0 0
Valsa George 22 July 2017

Yes, focus only on the target, never get carried away by extraneous objects....! This ts the lesson the poem teaches me! Great senryu!

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 22 July 2017

Yes, No Distractions! Thank you so much, Valsa.

0 0
Muhammad Ali 20 July 2017

Ok, i admit, it was seagull. smart poem and nice humor. seagul is a friend of mine!

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 20 July 2017

And such a fine friend! Thanks so much, Muhammad.

0 0
Nosheen Irfan 17 July 2017

Hahahaha. Humor n deep insight can go together, you make us believe here. A 10

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 17 July 2017

Thank you so much, Nosheen. Terrific reaction.

0 0
Unwritten Soul 14 July 2017

Hahahahaha o fish or other eyes dont get trapped...ok hahahaha what a humor write here :)

1 0 Reply
Mj Lemon 14 July 2017

Thank you so much, Soul. That is a great reaction!

0 0
Close
Error Success