Thursday, August 4, 2016

Nessie And Her Red Lipstick (One Of Three) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Nessie and Her Red lipstick

Across the loch, auld Nessie sits
with morning paper and red lipstick
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Annette Aitken
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Anthony Burkett 03 February 2017

I'll wager that red lipstick was put on for a rendezvous with me... unfortunately I was otherwise detained... ;) A delightful tale! And so much so because it shows such a light and humorous side of you and your pen... very well done!

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Terry Craddock 10 January 2017

'Across the loch, auld Nessie sits with morning paper and red lipstick before the chaser man awake try take her picture, prove she's not fake.' which brand of lipstick sea green or lake pearl, a delightful write

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 August 2016

Her red lipstick! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bill Cantrell 13 August 2016

I love humorous poems, a great job, I must admit....I never thought of her with lipstick...maybe a nose ring but not lipstick; -)

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Tom Billsborough 05 August 2016

My favourite colour too! Blue! Nessie is very elusive. Bet she couldn't hide in your handbag though! mmmm... well. Better check, eh? Very funny Tom

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