Ness Comments

You have written a beautiful portrait - one to cherish and remember. It will be interesting to compare it to later versions. Be sure to write more about her from time to time. I think we poets have the advantage of capturing our past and those around us for later happy times to be remembered. At first, reading the title, the image of the Loch Ness, came to mind. Your ending could easily apply, if Ness is female, to what many people are waiting for: Peering at the camera, Ness endures Her very first photo shoot!