Nepenthe Of Respite Comments

Nicely expressed emotion and pain... good penned also...

nice emotions all through the poem...well written

The seed of thought has sprouted well and you have got the sapling grown into a tree indeed! I am afraid now the work is crying for a bit of editing here and there for want of linguistic acceptability and an evenly used diction. As a whole the work is fine... Thanks for the sharing

You tell all to us with nice sounding poem. sometimes a chocolate can be so bitter, with some cream it will be milder and lovely, so have some in your feeling to make your life sweeter in bitterness Ok_Soul

emotion is spit well

Wow, as always, great rhythm and rhyming. You have a talent for old-sounding poems. Thank you for inviting me to read this poem.