Saturday, June 19, 2010

Neon Yellow Comments

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In this cyber city called Tokyo,
A hazy smog is suddenly aglow,
Superheated chemically reactive gas,
Flickers behind a sheath of glass,
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Dale Mullock
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Brandi Guthrie 05 July 2010

Oh I love this poem! I really do. I have a perfact vision in my head of the city you so phonetically layed out. I like how used similar ending letters in some of the lines, gave an almost Cure quality. Keep em coming, Dale.

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