Oh neon poetess,
We take delight,
With every word upon your breath
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you write with such effortless beauty--- I think all us moths are attracted to your light--a million stars bless you and your pen and faved
5 Strs for this scintillating poem, dear Bill. To my Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing, the photograph added is brilliant. Magnificent Poem: Neon Poetess
Sir, you have so well penned moth for its characteristics and midnight poetess's poetic galore. Wonderful words.
Very Fascinating poem, dear Bill, crystal clear and cutest composed. I have enjoyed very much this amazing poem.
A spllediid work my friend! I appreciate and admire the lucidity of your poetic expression!
The entire life has been described in the story of a dark night and a sunny day. It shows poet's lovely imagination and abilities to write a poem on it. A nice poem.
Hello, Bill. I am new here a only have 2 poems posted. I have been writing for three months. I enjoyed you'r poem and can relate to it, , most definitelly. Best, Panagiota
What a wonderful poem! Such fresh images and lovely lyrical flow! Congratulations on this well-wrought verse!
Thank you Harley, oh if I could only write like you, I appreciate your reading and commenting very much! !
Oh neon poetess, We take delight, With every word upon your breath...delightful poetic expression! A beautiful poem my friend! (10)
So heart-touching and soul-stirring write. Gives great poetic delight. Kudos.
Thank you so much for reading and your comment, reaching the soul is the greatest compliment a poet can get, I truly thank you!
Ever so beautifully moving and heartfelt! .. Thank you ever so much for sharing this! .. Ever so many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++
A great poet is one who can negate himself. He put himself on the shoes of others and feel their pain. A wonderful poem so full of emotions. Very touching. Beautifully crafted write.10
Thank you so much! I do find it the great pleasure of being that of which I write, you are very kind and I really appreciate your comment!
Every word shared with breath by neon poetess is definitely brilliant word and sweet word. Midnight poets cry a lot when they feel gladly that beats of heart motivate life towards death. Moths attracted to light no more assure life again because there is chance to burn in flame. Poets observe everything very finely. An amazing poem is very brilliantly and excellently penned...10
Again, thank you my friend, you encourage everyone with your support and comments, you truly are a poet!
Very very interested poem I like it to much.........10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you very much, I appreciate your reading and commenting, I will read your poetry
Hmm....this feels like a song? Is it just me? I really like the symbolism behind it as well. But most of all I love the following lines: Oh midnight poet, In this darkened world, A weary soul does well to cry Truly I'd agree that a weary soul does well to cry. I find poetry is a great way to unload those weary emotions, so I really relate to this line. Beautifully done Bill! ~
Thank you so much, funny you mention song, I have played guitar all of my life and written songs, that is what got me interested in poetry, many poems I write are are songs that I reword a bit, thank you again my friend
I revisit your Night Poetess, presented in full brilliance, thank you so much for sharing, dear Bill.