Friday, March 22, 2019

Neon Lights Comments

Rating: 5.0

The naked earth in the neon lights,
I am lost in the porn of its sights,
It's not only me all alone, who is lost,
The sky is lost in the unseen heights!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Aniruddha Pathak 23 March 2019

Slow ripening I need and I like, I am clay! .. I liked this expression.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 March 2019

neon lights as u rightly say advances kids sad though thru and sun simply follows kids grow faster than ivy on screens at nightly neon glows show all hidden charms and blows neon lights u have said so

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 March 2019

A meaningful poem, neon light is the symbol of modern society in that electronic media matures a child before he is fir for it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 March 2019

A nice poem on neon lights. Enjoyed thoroughly about its sparkling quality and its harm. 'Neon lights colourful but have a few harms, I don't want to miss my teen age charms And it turns a child directly into an, To the sun I extend my welcoming arms. '... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 March 2019

A beautiful poem! Loved reading it.......10

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