Sunday, July 1, 2018

Neither Mortal Nor Immortal Comments

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I wonder,
where is the line that separates the object and its image,
I cannot deny,
I cannot remain silent,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kelly Kurt 02 July 2018

The line is individually subjective. A series of physical and biological events create a personal 'reality' in each of our minds. We are merely projections of the complexity of a bone encapsulated organ.

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Red Soul 02 July 2018

None of us really have an idea of what lies beyond. Sometimes, I feel that it is better to leave what's beyond to itself and just be the best we can be. A wonderfully written poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 July 2018

A great philosophical write. Intelligently penned.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 July 2018

This the wonder of natural creation. This is not easy task to separate the lines of natural perception between mortal and immortal. One day each of us will cross this line. Human body with life is such example. An amazing philosophical poem is excellently presented...10

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