Friday, September 18, 2009

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All alone
Shadows, casting its way around me
Silence, taking my breath away
Helpless, I cannot speak
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Helena Alvarez
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Sonia Irizarry 18 September 2009

neglected, I really feel U girl, , , I had felt like that or actually was Neglected by someone i never expected, but I Luv her in a silence all alone, I really Wish She don't ever feel Neglected from me, I do Wish 4U 2take a Step Forward.; } Don't feel Helpless, , , , don't FeaR Ever.

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Danny H 18 September 2009

: ( So sad yet an amazing poem you have quite a talent for poetry :)

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