Don't think negative sign as a zero,
If positive sign is heroine negative is hero.
Though positive is day, negative is night,
Later is dark and former is bright.
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Without darkness there is no meaning of bright! Nice piece of work.
lovely poem. Do agree that being positive is good. but if a person sees something positive in every negative charge, then for sure the end will be positive.
Liked this thoughtful poem....................................10
A lot of thought went into writing this poem. There are two sides to every coin. If one doesn't understand what is right then one doesn't understand wrong either. Discipline begins at home, pre school. We should all be taught the difference between good and bad, right and wrong, from the very beginning. If we instil a positive attitude in our children then they will become positive adults. An admirable write Kumar.
I enjoy your use of metaphor to drive your points of philosophy. Excellent poem
Opposites when merged release immense energy and create positive results! But negative thoughts are not going to help us. At the same time, positive thoughts can work miracles! A thought provoking poem! Enjoyed!
picture of Kesav Easwaran xNice allegories you bring into to end with a nicer message Kumarmani 3 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xLoved this very original write 3 Aug 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x.......being happy and positive is most attractive...very nice message and great write ★ 3 Aug 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWell done, , , Sir, , , 4 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xBeautifully allegorical.....without darkness there is no meaning of bright'' my favorite line. Written by a wise and intelligent author. Very nicely penned. 4 Aug 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xNoble sentiments, noble thoughts, noble poetry. 4 Aug 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xExcellent poem! Beautiful and true! Thank you for sharing. 5 Aug 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xYou can hide darkness in light but the darkness cannot hide the light. 5 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xExcellent poetry, allegorical, wonderful end rhymes and I admire the theme, Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. 6 Aug 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Sneha SK xThis is beautiful and I quite adore the intricate metaphors you indoctrinate. Thank you for sharing. 6 Aug 2015 by Sneha SK | Reply