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Light shadows on your dark face. You'd just taken a seat at the table and put your hands, gone pray, upon it. Light and darkness, shadows. a goof reflection. t ony

'You look like a ghost who's trying to summon up the living' - Wonderful!

You look like a ghost who's trying to summon up the living. Evocative, and compelling, its the reverse world in which beauty is turned inside out into horror. A good choice for poem of the day.

From one's perspective of life, That always changed.. James McLain

Modern poem by breath......very good observation

You look like a ghost who's trying to summon up the living. a very good poem. tony

Black by the sun! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

This is awesome poetry. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

A wonderful poem by Wislawa Szymborska.....................

Wow! This poet knows how to write down thoughts higher than the moon and deeper than eternity- -on my favorite poets' list, that's for sure.