Neelum (beautiful sapphire, always shining bright)
Neelum is a resting place.
of this blue shimmer.
Where joy lulls into eyes the joy,
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Beauty and poetry being resident in the eye of the heholder, or reader, well I believe we should understand.
Really, this poem has awful grammar and imagery. How can you hypocrites praise such meaningless garbage?
That hazy blue valley! Captures all the longings of heart. congratulations!
Confusing imagery. Truly I did not know what to make of this poem. Intriguing.
My purple past prime, Comes into eye like leaves on willow tree! O! you love! - beautiful.. happiness, beauty, dusk, . graciousness. tony
Like dim, dusky clouds from gracious ezman, While happy day sinks into sweet night, - Charming expression. Congrats being POD
Neelum a heart a beautiful heavenly heart where you everyone the beauty live peacefully........./// so beautiful poem
The beauty of Neelum Valley, peace and greenery, a nice place to rest in summer, the poet has magnificently captured all in a lovely poem. A very good selection as member.s poem.
A wonderful poem of the day, Affaq. Congrats for being selected....10++++++++
Where joy lulls into eyes the joy, And worries vanish. Like dim, dusky clouds from gracious ezman, While happy day sinks into sweet night, .... beautiful poem and very poetic conception dear poet. thank u. tony
beautiful poetic expression- When you bear a baby! You know: She may receive it nude beauty in heirs'y- You be mine love- And she'll use its sapphire treasury- //
Excellent poem....well written!