Monday, April 8, 2019

Neelum! Comments

Rating: 3.9

Neelum (beautiful sapphire, always shining bright)
Neelum is a resting place.
of this blue shimmer.
Where joy lulls into eyes the joy,
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AFFAQ NABI
COMMENTS
Dominic Windram 16 April 2019

Excellent poem....well written!

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Aniruddha Pathak 14 April 2019

Beauty and poetry being resident in the eye of the heholder, or reader, well I believe we should understand.

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Honest Critic 13 April 2019

My purple past prime! What the heck is that supposed to mean?

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Honest Critic 13 April 2019

Really, this poem has awful grammar and imagery. How can you hypocrites praise such meaningless garbage?

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Savita Tyagi 13 April 2019

That hazy blue valley! Captures all the longings of heart. congratulations!

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Kayode Are 13 April 2019

Confusing imagery. Truly I did not know what to make of this poem. Intriguing.

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Honest Critic 13 April 2019

So true! Confusing indeed! Thanks for being honest, Kayode!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 April 2019

My purple past prime, Comes into eye like leaves on willow tree! O! you love! - beautiful.. happiness, beauty, dusk, . graciousness. tony

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Like dim, dusky clouds from gracious ezman, While happy day sinks into sweet night, - Charming expression. Congrats being POD

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Tom Allport 13 April 2019

Hope springs eternal whilst under blue skies....tis true!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 April 2019

Into sweet night! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 April 2019

Neelum a heart a beautiful heavenly heart where you everyone the beauty live peacefully........./// so beautiful poem

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Akhtar Jawad 13 April 2019

The beauty of Neelum Valley, peace and greenery, a nice place to rest in summer, the poet has magnificently captured all in a lovely poem. A very good selection as member.s poem.

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The Truth 13 April 2019

This Is The Most Boring Poetry Site On The Web

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SO HO 13 April 2019

Why are you on it? Your truth has no foundation. Just a dope!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 April 2019

A wonderful poem of the day, Affaq. Congrats for being selected....10++++++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 10 April 2019

Where joy lulls into eyes the joy, And worries vanish. Like dim, dusky clouds from gracious ezman, While happy day sinks into sweet night, .... beautiful poem and very poetic conception dear poet. thank u. tony

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Mahtab Bangalee 09 April 2019

beautiful poetic expression- When you bear a baby! You know: She may receive it nude beauty in heirs'y- You be mine love- And she'll use its sapphire treasury- //

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