Wednesday, October 29, 2014

Neelofer Comments

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What will be the fate of a nation waiting to welcome,
A message of destruction from the annoyed nature,
Yes, at the moment its intensity is low like a warning,
For the people and the leaders for their foolish caricature!
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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful poem. Very true said, Neelofer is really a pretty name but of a cyclone. We can only pray to protect us coming disaster. Meaningful write. Loved reading it.

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Paul Sebastian 30 October 2014

A beautiful write. Neelofer is not to be assumed as fireworks but something that man has to be wary of. Not another Flood or another earth disaster and not another Noah's Arc to save the god-fearing few. Let's pray that man will not be so naive to ignore the warning.

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Valsa George 30 October 2014

Wonderful poem! I just love the wise thoughts here! With an attractive name a cyclone Neelofer, is predicted to rock our land soon! We donot know its magnitude and how much devastation it is going to cause! Let us pray to Almighty to spare the land from its annihilative power! A 10

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Salini Nair 30 October 2014

For the people and the leaders for their foolish caricature! ...truth a great prayer for the survival...........lets hope it wont blast heavily..............

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