Thursday, November 20, 2008

Need Your Spell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Down into the dark alley way,
Oh baby! I know not where to you walk,
I am so mesmerized by your looks
Oh baby! lead me lead me,
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Reshma Ramesh
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Antonio Liao 03 December 2008

oh.... what a perfect mystery poem.... a suspense.... that allude me to see whats in my heart... so special indeed.... i love to read... some of the elements in your poem... Thank you... God bless

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Sadiqullah Khan 02 December 2008

There is a lot hidden passion here and reshma you always know how then to express it, , i like the passionate style, , why not to be outlandish, , there is someone out there who can speak with fervour, , many 10s

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Original Unknown Girl 01 December 2008

Sounds like he bewitched you.... passionately told. HG: -) xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 30 November 2008

You've captured the feeling so well Reshma.. Andrew 10

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Tarun Sharma 30 November 2008

crystal clear heart for the noun in the poem, true and couragious rgds

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2008

This poem would definitely make great lyrics for a love song. Haunting and passionate, I can hear a guitar wailing through your lines. An interesting variation on your other poetry too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 November 2008

WoooooooooosH! I think my P.C. wires might be smoking! lol! Hope to see this one in your soon-to-come-collection, young lady! FjR

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 20 November 2008

Oh...this poem haunts......greatly expressed....with amazing intensity...thanks.

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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