Down into the dark alley way,
Oh baby! I know not where to you walk,
I am so mesmerized by your looks
Oh baby! lead me lead me,
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There is a lot hidden passion here and reshma you always know how then to express it, , i like the passionate style, , why not to be outlandish, , there is someone out there who can speak with fervour, , many 10s
Sounds like he bewitched you.... passionately told. HG: -) xx
You've captured the feeling so well Reshma.. Andrew 10
crystal clear heart for the noun in the poem, true and couragious rgds
This poem would definitely make great lyrics for a love song. Haunting and passionate, I can hear a guitar wailing through your lines. An interesting variation on your other poetry too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
WoooooooooosH! I think my P.C. wires might be smoking! lol! Hope to see this one in your soon-to-come-collection, young lady! FjR
Oh...this poem haunts......greatly expressed....with amazing intensity...thanks.
oh.... what a perfect mystery poem.... a suspense.... that allude me to see whats in my heart... so special indeed.... i love to read... some of the elements in your poem... Thank you... God bless