You need not rush
Without force Just push
The structure may come down
The saying is well known
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I love it Manzen1 minute ago i love the rhyme. Good job Comment +1 Inspiring
I Joshua Furtado1 minute ago Very well put together, some rhyme is off (it seems you were going for it, but the words do not rhyme although the spelling would appear otherwise) other than that, nice job.
Ok, but work needed Willum Shaw18 minutes ago I could really like it, but it sounds like it is trying to rhyme a bit too much- especially the third and last paragraph