Saturday, May 16, 2009

Need From A Boy, Girls (The 8 Things) Comments

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The smart one who looks after his way
Who never to be ashamed at what he say
He is the one to be hunted
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Luwi Habte
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Vijay Gupta 29 May 2009

everyone wants the best. who will love the mediocre?

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Amir Amzah 28 May 2009

i like it from the start till the end.... the best line is line number 2... keep it up... kepp writing.

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a lovely beautiful poem..some how it is right and more can be added may be..10+++

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Maya Hershey 22 May 2009

very good, i liked it, a very impressive way of showing what a lady really wants! ! good job... peace.. Maya

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Daryl Young 22 May 2009

Well done young lady. An exellent poem. With a very good subject matter. I loved to read it. Rabbit

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 20 May 2009

Not a steep list..I think we all want if we decide to pair; someone who is kind, independent, secure and clean...yes CLEAN! ! ! in spirit and body and soul..I like this piece. Sagacity abound here.

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My young girl, we are very demanding of the others. We always wait more than we give in exchange. Think about that!

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Tou Yang 17 May 2009

wow this poem was great... i feel like i need to be more like this person that you are describing...

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Chad Foster 17 May 2009

this poem was really enjoyable. in the end i can actually picture someone. very well written.

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Barbara Terry 17 May 2009

Okay where do I find this guy that is hard to find these days? You have written another fine poem giving women something to look forward to in a boyfriend, a lover, a mate. I want a guy with all of these attributes, as well as a strong physical body to protect me with, and hold me. Thank you sharing. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Carol Gall 17 May 2009

lovely verses you write very well

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James Mclain 16 May 2009

It is this then through your mind of souls that you know what it is that you want..iip..most excellant verse from your purse..thank you..

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