Who am I? 
Why am I no-one?
                
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Who are you really? You are me, clearly We seek to create An air of mystery no, no need for you Who? Who? You? I need you? Conflicting thoughts.. trying to create a philosophy of existence, need, dependence, happiness and sadness. Very nice poem..you become philosophical. Write more.. you are original in your thinking.. tony

 
                     
                
A great start with a nice poem, Irma. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks