Thursday, January 7, 2010

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i know it is wrong
but you are my song
my soul feels lighter when i see your smile
my heart it does beguile
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C.S. Keskuela
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Prince Obed de la Cruz 07 January 2010

oh i can see that you have a unique pattern on presenting the lines with rhymes... you remind me of the young poet who died years ago named 'Mattie Stepaneck' and he has a great poem titled 'I AM'... anyway, nice poem!

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Nikunj Sharma 07 January 2010

good poem, expressing your feelings and obsession....good work

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