When I am in need of nectar the sky rains nectar,
but sometimes when I forget my sun,
it rains fires and heat strokes.
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I am happy that the word 'nectar' used by me in my poem turned out to be the inspiration behind this highly imaginative poem! Thank you for mentioning my name here.... Akhtar ji!
A highly imaginative poem based on metaphor. How does nectar of love seep in conjugal life is nicely painted. A gorgeous poem shared amazingly.10
O I'm Swallow- on this bough to sky, with pair of beck and dried throat, waiting for little mercy of GOD! I'm thirsty here, there and everywhere water and water but I'm wonder these waters do not quench me! The rain, yes the rain is nectar; not this is normal earthly water this nectar only quenches my dried throat forever! //// Excellent comment and excellent writings- SIR
The nectar of love is sipped by every lover. Imaginative.++10
Magnificently crafted imaginative write. Yes, the nectar of love could tame everything even the hotness of the sun. A great poem on life.10+++++