Thursday, July 19, 2018

Nectar Of Love (A Comment On Valsa George's Poem When The Sky Rained Nectar) Comments

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When I am in need of nectar the sky rains nectar,
but sometimes when I forget my sun,
it rains fires and heat strokes.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 July 2018

Magnificently crafted imaginative write. Yes, the nectar of love could tame everything even the hotness of the sun. A great poem on life.10+++++

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Valsa George 19 July 2018

I am happy that the word 'nectar' used by me in my poem turned out to be the inspiration behind this highly imaginative poem! Thank you for mentioning my name here.... Akhtar ji!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2018

A highly imaginative poem based on metaphor. How does nectar of love seep in conjugal life is nicely painted. A gorgeous poem shared amazingly.10

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Red Soul 19 July 2018

A very charming and sweet poem Jawad sahab. Thanks for sharing: -)

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Mahtab Bangalee 19 July 2018

O I'm Swallow- on this bough to sky, with pair of beck and dried throat, waiting for little mercy of GOD! I'm thirsty here, there and everywhere water and water but I'm wonder these waters do not quench me! The rain, yes the rain is nectar; not this is normal earthly water this nectar only quenches my dried throat forever! //// Excellent comment and excellent writings- SIR

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 July 2018

Chems of conjugal life nicely painted.

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Robert Murray Smith 19 July 2018

The nectar of love is sipped by every lover. Imaginative.++10

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