Tuesday, February 2, 2016

Nectar Of A Poetical Essence Comments

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Listening attentively and completely to time centering
itself within the music of my interior life.

Second hand marching on, giving a metronome effect in
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Dimitrios Galanis 02 February 2016

You have a great posibility in composing verses and making a poem stand up on its feet with an easy extraordinary.One has the impression words, phrases, metaphors are a running water to flow through your finger.You will excuse me only to say that we, europeans, do not like the references to gods.We do not live in Middle East.Europe is another world.But I know how things are in U.S much worse as far as it conserns belief in supernational [power.Your audience may expect from you to respect iys devotions.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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